{"id":3395,"date":"2011-03-04T13:07:59","date_gmt":"2011-03-04T10:07:59","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/lorenalupu.wordpress.com\/?p=3395"},"modified":"2011-03-04T13:07:59","modified_gmt":"2011-03-04T10:07:59","slug":"ziaristi-si-fituicari","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/lorenalupu.com\/blog\/ziaristi-si-fituicari\/","title":{"rendered":"Ziari\u015fti \u015fi fi\u0163uicari"},"content":{"rendered":"

St\u0103team io ieri, \u00een toiul nop\u0163ii, \u015fi, printre zece trolaje \u00een zece locuri (de \u0103sta<\/a> sunt \u00een mod special m\u00e2ndr\u0103, c\u0103 e teren nou \u015fi \u00eenc\u0103 n-am f\u0103cut scandal pe acolo p\u00e2n\u0103 acum), citeam un articol despre Iri \u015fi Moni.<\/p>\n

Iat\u0103-l<\/a>.<\/p>\n

Nu despre Iri \u015fi Moni am de g\u00e2nd s\u0103 v\u0103 vorbesc \u00een prezenta postare (de\u015fi \u0163in cu el la faza asta, forza Iri!) ci despre tonul \u015fi modul de redactare al articolului.<\/p>\n

CARE E CEA MAI FRAPANT\u0102 DIFEREN\u0162\u0102 \u00ceNTRE UN ASTFEL DE TEXT \u015eI UN ECHIVALENT ROM\u00c2NESC? Ei, bine, lipsa total\u0103 a mirosului de tabloid. Lipsa total\u0103 a senza\u0163iei de gher\u0163oial\u0103 slinoas\u0103. Eu, cititor, aflu ce e de aflat: o fat\u0103 s\u0103rac\u0103 se m\u0103rit\u0103 cu un tip bogat, se folose\u015fte de banii lui \u015fi \u00eel las\u0103; povestea m\u0103 captiveaz\u0103, pentru c\u0103 e relatat\u0103 frumos; dar nici o clip\u0103 nu am senza\u0163ia gre\u0163oas\u0103 de cloac\u0103 de jeg.<\/p>\n

Cum se ob\u0163ine un astfel de efect?<\/p>\n

\u00cen acest text, eu identific urm\u0103toarele arme:<\/p>\n

–concentrarea pe (1) story \u015fi (2) fapte<\/strong>. nu am ce s\u0103 zic mai mult, c\u0103 e clar.<\/p>\n

–lipsa redundan\u0163elor, a pauzelor de logic\u0103 \u015fi a specula\u0163iilor prezentate drept adev\u0103ruri. <\/strong><\/p>\n

-ziaristul e impar\u0163ial. nu \u00eencearc\u0103 s\u0103 ne bage pe g\u00e2t p\u0103rerea lui despre personaje \u015fi nu se bate pe burt\u0103 cu ele. <\/strong>. “fraierul, curva \u015fi oierul”. Poate izul de b\u00e2rf\u0103 de mahala al unui ziar este dat \u015fi de chestiile astea. Presa, a\u015fa cum o facem noi, aduce din ce \u00een ce mai mult cu o \u015fedin\u0163\u0103 de administra\u0163ie a unui bloc din periferia Bucure\u015ftiului, unde pove\u015ftile sunt relatate trunchiat, c\u0103, na, bietele babe sunt senile, faptele sunt neclare \u015fi insuficient verificate iar p\u0103rerea despre personaje e rostit\u0103 \u0163\u0103\u0163e\u015fte, nenuan\u0163at: “curva dreacu’, cum l-a supt p\u0103 \u0103la d\u0103 bani \u015fi l-a l\u0103sat. Siiiigur are p\u0103 altu’, ce-i proast\u0103”?<\/p>\n

–ziaristul nu \u00eencearc\u0103 s\u0103 ne impun\u0103 ce s\u0103 sim\u0163im<\/strong>. “zi, f\u0103, nu e d\u0103 tot c\u0103catul?” \u00ee\u0163i d\u0103 un cot complice fi\u0163uicarul rom\u00e2n, naturally born \u0163a\u0163\u0103. cel din exemplul dat are \u00eencredere c\u0103, dac\u0103 ne spune o poveste \u015fi ne d\u0103 ni\u015fte detalii f\u0103r\u0103 colorit emo\u0163ional, vom sim\u0163i \u015fi singuri ce e de sim\u0163it.<\/p>\n

–lipsa cli\u015feelor<\/strong>. da, ei n-au avut 50 de ani de lemnificare a limbajului. \u015fi nici al\u0163i 20 de ani de purcificare a limbajului. de aceea, au \u00eencredere c\u0103 interesul cititorului poate fi men\u0163inut \u015fi f\u0103r\u0103 sodomizarea cuvintelor. \u015fi f\u0103r\u0103 idei fixe, fraze-stereotip \u015fi alte subproduse ale g\u00e2ndirii.<\/p>\n

–gra\u0163ia<\/strong>. da, nenic\u0103, m-am s\u0103turat s\u0103 citesc “t\u00e2rfa care l-a stors p\u0103 ba\u015ftan”, vreau s\u0103 citesc “Cinderella tale with a materialistic twist”. Vreau s\u0103 mi se povesteasc\u0103 lucruri cu gra\u0163ie \u015fi farmec. Vreau s\u0103 \u00eemi plac\u0103 ceea ce citesc, s\u0103 m\u0103 \u00eenc\u00e2nte alegerea cuvintelor, s\u0103 zic: “uite, c\u00e2t\u0103 iscusin\u0163\u0103, c\u00e2t spirit”.<\/p>\n

Toate astea la un loc \u00eenseamn\u0103 pres\u0103. M\u0103 \u00eentreb doar c\u00e2t o s\u0103 mai dureze \u015fedin\u0163a administra\u0163iei de bloc de la noi.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

St\u0103team io ieri, \u00een toiul nop\u0163ii, \u015fi, printre zece trolaje \u00een zece locuri (de \u0103sta sunt \u00een mod special m\u00e2ndr\u0103, c\u0103 e teren nou...<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":false,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2},"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-3395","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-spicy"],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_likes_enabled":true,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/lorenalupu.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/3395","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/lorenalupu.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/lorenalupu.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/lorenalupu.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/lorenalupu.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=3395"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/lorenalupu.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/3395\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/lorenalupu.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=3395"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/lorenalupu.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=3395"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/lorenalupu.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=3395"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}